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Design Critique please?
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twice New member
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 Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 07:45
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m253/aquagrrl/tmp/comp20080510-1.png Please be gentle.  
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sevensamurai New member
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 01:43
I like the clean layout, which is always a plus, but it feels a bit generic (like a lot of other Web 2.0 layouts I've seen). But complete originality isn't always an issue when you're trying to please a client, so below are just some general thoughts I had. - The "logo" is far too plain and lonely sitting at the top. If they don't have a logo, maybe try putting the text in a header with a background image. It just needs something up there. - The bullets under "what's inside" could use a bit of styling. Maybe an image for the bullet points, or maybe a background color for each point. - I would try to find a way to shorten the page. You have an ENTER STORE button but at the bottom of the page are some boxes for the products. I get what you're trying to do, but I would consider only one product box on the home page. Other than that, it's a solid design and the client should be happy.
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dummerAugust New member
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Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 00:09
- far to much information to keep on one page - looks more like a flyer, ready to be printed - yellow section looks a little cheap, having a "post-it"-like style - yellow section has far too much colors; text in second paragraph is hard to read - on what`s inside section you show a bottle, not the content of it, which isn`t supportive - there is a contrast problem in the section immediately before the footer, the text is hard to read _________________ Web Design & Visual Design - Individual & Distinguishable http://www.dummeraugust.com/
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