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meastp

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 23:20
Hi!

I've made a logo which I'd love some opinions on:



Design info:

Site: bickeringleague - "we bicker"

Symbols: Two faces arguing/bickering, or a B.

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 08:50
I think it is very creative and attractive, however in my opinion the logo would be best center aligned with the text, even if the widths don't match.

You could also changed the size/dimensions of the type to have them match each other.
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Reply with quote Post Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 22:29
Hi!

Thanks for the reply. I'm not exactly sure what you meant by changing the type. Did you mean the two words, or the logo and the text?

Anyway, I made enchangements:

http://folk.ntnu.no/taraldsv/logo-mockup2.png

Here, we / crowd of bickering "smileys" is another symbol. What do you think?

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 23:55
Yea I kind of though my explanation was a little crappy I didn't know how to say it well, but you did exactly what I meant with the top right example, and I think it looks great!
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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 05:21
come over to logopond.com you will get more help specifically with this there

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu May 22, 2008 10:06
BD: Thanks! :)

CD: Great!, I have made a thread on logopond.

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 22:42
Some input from me:

- at first look, I wasn`t really able to distinguish the 2 faces, maybe because I percepted the form as a whole (could be just me)
- I don`t know if the "perspective" added through the size of the faces makes sense
- perhaps if preserving the face form an indication that this face talks/bickers should be made (lile lines comming out of its mouth)
- about the font type: I agree with the statements made on logopond
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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 13:32
Nice logo.
I have simple suggestions ... I think the space between the symbol and the text can be reduced. The text can be darker than the symbol.
Good work.

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 14:42
Its a cute logo.. however, the colors are just too light and makes the logo look more like a watermark for material back grounds...

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Jul 11, 2008 14:46
I really like the logo although i think you may have to adjust the text. It looks off side and needs to be centered.

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