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Design - needs more.....
Design - needs more.....
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va New member
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Hi everyone,
I've just done a design for a mate and was wondering if you had any words of advice. I feel it's lacking something (or quite a lot maybe). Maybe something extra for the navigation links or a slight adjust to the colour of the paper or text. Anyway, the image can be found here. EDIT: On second thoughts: Here's one with a white 'paper'. I think I prefer this now. (the reason this wasnt white is that the background was originally - now the background is the tiled business card) Thanks, Pete |
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Yaral New member
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My opinion:
- Push the paper up higher (maybe to around the baseline of 78plate) and adjust naviagation and content accordingly. - Add some texture to the headers on paper since their going to be images. A worn look will make them sit on the paper better since the paper is crumpled. - If your keeping those links along the bottom, consider another black bar (or other solid color) so they dont blend into the background. - Add a few more polaroids to the bottom right to give it a bit more weight. Also, if its not a placeholder, get a better photo. |
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va New member
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Great suggestions Yaral, thanks! |
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cj2a Full member
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Nice overall design...I like it as-is. _________________ artbitz stock illustration |
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webdesignernew New member
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I like original - green - good design, agree with making the links at the bottom not blend with the background.
http://www.soula.com/portfolio.php |
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