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va

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 00:11
Hi everyone,

I've just done a design for a mate and was wondering if you had any words of advice. I feel it's lacking something (or quite a lot maybe).

Maybe something extra for the navigation links or a slight adjust to the colour of the paper or text.

Anyway, the image can be found here.

EDIT: On second thoughts: Here's one with a white 'paper'. I think I prefer this now. (the reason this wasnt white is that the background was originally - now the background is the tiled business card)

Thanks,

Pete

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Yaral

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 02:09
My opinion:

- Push the paper up higher (maybe to around the baseline of 78plate) and adjust naviagation and content accordingly.

- Add some texture to the headers on paper since their going to be images. A worn look will make them sit on the paper better since the paper is crumpled.

- If your keeping those links along the bottom, consider another black bar (or other solid color) so they dont blend into the background.

- Add a few more polaroids to the bottom right to give it a bit more weight. Also, if its not a placeholder, get a better photo.

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va

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 11:22
Great suggestions Yaral, thanks!

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cj2a

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 17:33
Nice overall design...I like it as-is.
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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 15:44
I like original - green - good design, agree with making the links at the bottom not blend with the background.



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