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Reply with quote Post Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 22:41
Worked on an ad for the local ferrari dealership and want some feedback before I send it to him for final proofing.

Thank You in Advance.

Matthew



Link to original on flickr http://www.flickr.com/photo_zoom.gne?id=97216883&size=l

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 23:54
My only suggestion would be to play around with the "Maximum Pleasure" text, maybe make it more pronounced?

Just an idea.

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 02:55
"Still looks Sexy in Black and White" could be more stylized and exciting, given that it's a Ferrari after all..

Have you seen those new Jaguar ads that say "Gorgeous is born that way".. think something that can evoke speed, sex, and blood-pulsing performance.

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digital_rebel_xt wrote:
Worked on an ad for the local ferrari dealership and want some feedback before I send it to him for final proofing.

Thank You in Advance.

Matthew



Link to original on flickr http://www.flickr.com/photo_zoom.gne?id=97216883&size=l


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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 03:47
You ask me last time for Career opportunity site, I finally find it, click here http://jobqueen.com/?fRefID=325

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 03:53
I do believe that harry_33q is trying to get some advertising going. As in "spammish" activity, just seems to be that your adding the same info into every post you see. Maybe it's just me though

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 06:21
remeber that time i was talking about blocking bots on a forum, i think harry is a bot. amazing huh, its actually programmed to leave comments. of course they are unrelated to the topic and go to a spam site, but the coding behind that has got to be awesome.

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Reply with quote Post Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 04:09
I didn't get what you meant about a bot, i see what you mean though 3 posts all the same thing. I get the same thing on my forum site once in awhile. They seem to strike the same thread all the time, not sure if they've tracked a keyword logged w/ a search engine or what brings them back to the same thread. The spam is totally irrelevant, it's not enough to be annoying, but an interesting situation.

Since none of the FlickR images are showing anymore :)

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